I decided to edited my double page spread further, I made the image bigger so the page will stand out more, by doing this Jasmines eyes (image) make better eye contact with the reader and this then should make the audience be drawn into the page. Also, I have added a quote on the page, I thought there was room for more information on the page so decided to use a quote out of the question section, this then gives the reader more information of what the story is going to be about, Also by using big speachmarks I thought it made the page more bolder and interesting. I decided to remove I question which was on the story I thought the page looked a little to busy. I think this now works better for the double page spread as a whole.
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