On this draft copy I decided to change the font of the quote so it is more clearer. I like the way 'Jazz', (girl in the picture) is facing towards the pug as it is like shes smiling because she's relating to the quote that 'she already has made it'. I have also rearranged some of the writing so the page looks better positioned. I have also added the full name of the girl in the image so it is clear to see it's all about her and she is the main focus of the magazine. On thing I have notice since I added this image is the C is missing out of the pug so when I upload my next draft this will have to be added.
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